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Old 01-06-2006, 06:33 PM   #16
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I demand you write more.
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Old 01-06-2006, 07:18 PM   #17
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we demand more, or i shall go out, buy a trout and slap you round the face with it
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Old 01-06-2006, 07:59 PM   #18
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we demand more, or i shall go out, buy a trout and slap you round the face with it
Excellent notion
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Old 01-06-2006, 11:14 PM   #19
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KEEP on writing!!! any way I could help? pay u on ro for chapters? =p
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Old 01-06-2006, 11:36 PM   #20
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~ 07/01/06 ~
Added latest update and rewrote the fight with Cloud to add some more character. left you with another awesome cliffhanger as well

ENJOYYYYY !!!! AND LEAVE FEEDBACK
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Old 01-07-2006, 12:09 AM   #21
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What a cliffhanger..what a cliffhanger. I hate you bastard, I want more! More!!
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Old 01-07-2006, 12:37 AM   #22
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Odin knows who it is, yes. *nodes sagely* Only two guilds there are of which he can be speaking, and only one can be the second best. Ah yes.
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Old 01-07-2006, 07:52 AM   #23
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HeHe Well it was 4am and I wanted sleep and I was like "hey if I leave it here... that would rally annoy people" so I did :P hmmm not many people post feedback am I just not captivated enough people? :'(
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Old 01-07-2006, 08:18 AM   #24
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I got no time to read now... but next week when im work, iŽll check this and the other F.A.N writings

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Old 01-07-2006, 09:39 AM   #25
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dont worry zero its the standard story line of killing you ^^
V Good btw
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Old 01-07-2006, 10:35 AM   #26
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Goooooood job !

Although I know you claimed you're not good at english xP, try not making so many runon sentences. Break them up and instead of more commas, put more periods. Keep it up :>O:
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Old 01-07-2006, 10:00 PM   #27
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Its odd seeing me be described in such a nice way xD, i really want to see more of what happens in the guild wars, hopefully kicking Zero's ass will be a good bit, and stop leveling and write more, its really addictive to read
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Old 01-09-2006, 12:39 PM   #28
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~ 09/01/06 ~
Another update, thistime an awesome flashback and battle.

FEEEDDDDD BACCKKKKK (I'm a feedback whore)
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Old 01-09-2006, 02:21 PM   #29
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Holy... cow... you got me stuck there, and ending with another cliffhanger hm?...
Well, it's all good, i want more though
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Old 01-09-2006, 03:34 PM   #30
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BTW Cid pointed this out to me, STORM IS A GUY there are bits where I referd to him as female but he is ment to be male in this story sorry for the mistakes
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